Bhari Bhari si aankhen thi meri,
suni suni si hansi thi teri.
har pal main khene ko itna kuch tha,
alfazoo ki kami ka siyapa sang tha.
har nazare ko mann main bithana tha,
har jagah ko do baar dekhna kam tha.
chahte the ye waqt yahi ruk jaye abhi,
pichtra hua samay bahut tha hasin.
Is jagah se judeh the rishtey kahin,
bhule nahin bhulte kisse the kahin.
Waise din najane kahan guzar gaye,
haste haste kahin saal guzar gaye.
sochte the juda na honge kabhi,
mile hain bichadkar us jagah hum sabhi.
aane wale kal ki parvaah kahan thi,
wause beete hue kal ki bhi parvah kahan thi.
jo chaar diwari lagte the jail kabhi,
aaj laga basta hai swarg yahin.
ji karta hai aaj fir wahi uniform phenu..
bag uthaun, doston ko phone ghumaon,
aur bina kuch soche samjhe,
apne skul ki taraf bhaag jaun.
main jaanta hun aisa waqt dubara nahi aayega,
parantu uss waqt ke baare main soch kar,
in aankhon main ansoon zaroor aayega.
20 minutes this timei took to write dis...fastes of all three...thanks to my cough didn't let me sleep...
ReplyDeletemahn.... clubbing thots lyk this, wonderful, as alwaz.. cherishing the writer in u, moreovr d moments gathere.. hats off tutu..
ReplyDeletekiller........!!uaeen uaaenn...u made me cry.......!!!i lovd it yaar....seriusly skul was the best part of lyf...geet
ReplyDeleteahh..school life is the best phase of life..undoubtedly...even i wanna go back to my heaven, my school, from this hell ..very well written..kanika k
ReplyDeletekya baat hai londe........... mast poem likhi hai tune to.......next chetan bhagat no??????
ReplyDeletewhose chetan bhagat waise does he also write poems lol!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleted beauty f dis poem is inexplicable......
ReplyDeletednt hav words for it.....
nice nice.......gud yar tu to senti senti hota ja rha hai.hehehe
ReplyDeletenice nice gud yar.......tu to senti senti hota ja rha hai.....hehehehee
ReplyDeletewah miya wah .. lajvaab :D ... ;lolz . tu iit mein ye sab kya krne lag gya . nywayz keep it up :D mast hai
ReplyDeletepata nahi tha logo ko hindi bhi aati hai ....... achchi hai par agli baar thoda aur khoobsurat banao.
ReplyDeletetis really good.........ol of dem, really amazing....u write really wel yar...
ReplyDeletei wonder y u found it so difficult 2 score in languages!!!!
keep writin...
aditi
well now i am not able to score in pcm lol!!!
ReplyDeletea nice touching poem.. made me remmbr my scool lyf !! :)
ReplyDeletenice nice gud yar.......tu to senti senti hota ja rha hai.....hehehehee
ReplyDeleted beauty f dis poem is inexplicable......
ReplyDeletednt hav words for it.....