well this poem is a result of many days of thinking and many events that happened in my life few days ago and this is what i took from it....
Everyday is not nice,
someday you get the whole cake,
some day u just get a slice,
someday you not even get a slice.
some fine day a girl looks nice,
the next day the girl looks very nice,
but the other day,some other girl in the city,
seems to capture your heart as she so pretty.
not everyday is your birthday,
not everyday is meant to be your birthday,
but every single day is a magical one,
because god gave another day to have fun.
Everyday i don't know how,
people get time to hate,
when there are so many to love,
not a single moment to waste.
Some know their future,
as it is the same routine daily,
it is in their couture,
they change anything barely.
Everyday people cal you crazy,
everyday they call you looser,
everyday they call you mad,
everyday they call you genius.
its up to you which day,
they get in you ahead,
on the wrong day you just lay,
on the right one you move ahead.
everyday some plan to do something new,
everyday some plan to study which is nt new,
everyday i plan to write a poem on a topic new,
even though it is read by only a few.
What drives me is my spirit inside,
keeping all my worries aside that ,
one day i know people will give heed
everyday to the poem i wrote.
Life is not about a mere list to follow,
Its a dream to be lived in reality,
doesn't matter how much your condition is shallow,
and then in the end making a list which came to be reality.
That what great men did,they were good dreamers,
everyday they dreamed something new, achieved something new,
but great men are not few,they are inside everyone of you,
not every night but everyday just try to make a dream come true.
nice as usual..
ReplyDeletethe girl part is funny :D
ReplyDeletethe girl part is funny :D
ReplyDeletei have a comment for almost every stanza...lol
ReplyDeleteWonder how every poem of Tushar Tuteja goes to a "Girl"..
"every single day is a magical one"
"
Everyday i don't know how,
people get time to hate,
when there are so many to love,
not a single moment to waste.
"
Now this is something like, your pen speaking my heart!
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everyday some plan to do something new,
everyday some plan to study which is nt new,
everyday i plan to write a poem on a topic new,
even though it is read by only a few
"
and Again!:P
"What drives me is my spirit inside"
here lies the massive differnce :(
"everyday just try to make a dream come true"
Moral of the story lies here!!
nyc work tutu!!
ReplyDeleteu really write frm ur heart.....wow!
keep it up..:)
nyc work tutu..
ReplyDeleteu really write frm ur ur heart...wow!
keep it up..:)
again a gud one
ReplyDeletehmm.. nice one... u r becoming good in poems day by day !!
ReplyDeletekeep it up !!
nice work dude...
ReplyDeleteamazing one dude...:) :) keep up the gud work...:) :)
ReplyDeletethe gal part is definitely true!!
ReplyDeletelol
bt ur work is actually commendable. :)
nice poem once again ....... but i have an issue.
ReplyDeleteI feel writing without rhyming can give the poem better strength and better soul. Think on it, continue your gud work !!
Snehil
@snehil ya i agree with you...i am still improving though...lets see what happens in the next one..
ReplyDeletei like it ! i love it actually ! its really cool....u r improving....and u writing on a variety of topix! thats really good ! applause!
ReplyDelete@shilpi thanks ya i am writing on different topics even that was mentioned in the poem ;)...
ReplyDeleteu r truly a genius tush. . i cant sae u r improving. . coz i like ol yr poems to d same extent. . evrythng u write is just perfect . . it goes deep inside my heart n i can actually feel it ol. .
ReplyDeleteoyeee great hai..tuttu..ultimate..ur best till now cheers..
ReplyDeleteHey..this one was a nyc read.. it seemed a casual poem in d start but went on to have a class of its own..now dats commendable..wat is equally striking is d fact that its a contemplative poem reflecting on life..d kind dat often run d risk of going stagnant at places, u know like dwelling a little too much on a point which may give d poem a static feel(though it doesnt mean d poem necessarily loses its brilliance.. just d grip on d reader sumtyms)..but urs did brilliantly..went in an absolutely beautiful flow..touching so many facets of lyf and moving on to d next!
ReplyDeletei think apart frm d flow the best thing is d way u squeezed so much in so little..hatts off to dat! :)
also i agree wd d point snehil made..
Slice of life... nice!
ReplyDeletelove this:
ReplyDelete"people get time to hate,
when there are so many to love,
not a single moment to waste."
I so agree with these lines. I think it's such a waste of time and energy, hating stuff.Whenever I am pissed, i breathe in deeply and try to pacify my self then think about positive things.
So True... i guess i can relate to that...
ReplyDelete"but every single day is a magical one..", if you believe it to be...
i never really thought that you could be so philosophical..
I have read this before!
ReplyDeletesweet and simple really nice one keep it up dude:)
ReplyDeleteGood yaar loved it.....
ReplyDeleteNice work yaar :)
ReplyDelete@fable and snehil : the thing with rhymmng scheme is...that it gives the poet in u an undescribable appeal..
ReplyDelete@tushar: maintaining the rhyming scheme/the lyrical(read musical) flow is not always easy... cz the problem comes wen u start compromisng wd d meaning just fr d wrds!!!! ....
Hence, personally, i prefer rhymng schemes... but the ones whch do not disturb the integrity f d verse...dats one f the reasons usually poems wd rhymng schemes are not that flatterng!!
@tushar: on this one..... i say its innocent in its own way... as fable said.. i slowly creates a niche for itslef.... nice wrk.... :)
me tooo..hv read it before dude! :)
ReplyDeleteGood yaar loved it.....
ReplyDeleteoyeee great hai..tuttu..ultimate..ur best till now cheers..
ReplyDeleteamazing one dude...:) :) keep up the gud work...:) :)
ReplyDeletenyc work tutu..
ReplyDeleteu really write frm ur ur heart...wow!
keep it up..:)
the girl part is funny :D
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