Our life is being represented on a time line,
On which there are marked our very first times.
I had a thirst to get first,
Never worked hard to get it printed on my score card,
This time to get first was destined,
was board class twelfth and i was determined.
It was my Birth day i failed,
due to which the party got delayed,
I was laughing because it was physics i flunk,
people thought at that time i was totally drunk.
The first time I m....bate,
seriously guys don't remember the exact date;
some say they did it o their b day,
I ask u guys do you remember that amazing day.
My mom says the first day in school,
I cried out a water of pool;
Nothing changed fourteen years after;
i left it , crying yet in laughter.
First day i came to kumaon
was terrified and deeply drowned;
by a roomie named alok,
who shouted abruptly beneath the cloak.
Few days back i wrote my first poem,
people were like "ahem ahem ahem" ;
Tushar was not that bright,
that he could actually write.
First time i drove a two wheeler ,
I jammed it into a office of property dealer;
the moment i was about to fell
My brother came shouting what the hell.
First time i drove a car ,
It was mruti 800 next to a sardar;
He had a habit of saying"go slow go slow",
honestly either his or mine head was about to blow.
Yet don't have my very first girl friend,
yet don't have my first kiss,
yet don't have my ..................,
don't ask about crush,i let it flush.
At night the sound of waves were loud and clear,
first time it was then i drank beer,
twelve people,on beach,with amazing sea,
the beer was actually disgracing me.
There are many things lefts unsaid,
there are many thing left undone,
I 'll definitely write ahead,
about the things i ll do ahead.
Now don't say the poem wasn't better that the first,
because it didn't had the charm of being first.
4 da frst tym sum1 has told me read his poem....bt so wndrfl wzz da experience dat i wish i shld b da frst 1 2 read ur wrds each n vry tym...it waz so wndrful dat i jst gt da rhyme...n nt 2 read ur poem vld b a terrible crime...
ReplyDeleteFirst time i drove a two wheeler ,
ReplyDeleteI jammed it into a office of property dealer...
Nice lines bro.. :) :)
wat can i say...it was an amazing fell....
ReplyDeleteA gud one..an honest one...a straight from heart poem...for the first time i feel some emotions let out..how some strange n weird first moments can make u laugh n leave u in awe..
ReplyDeletekeep on writing such poems..
hmmm..preparing to be next chetan bhagat...vaise nice one...nice expressions
ReplyDeletehmmm
ReplyDeleteachchi hai
nice rhythm, write more ......... m waiting for your next :)
Snehil
the poem ws beautifully written......
ReplyDeletenice job dude...
keep wirting.....
AMAN
awesome one!!!!
ReplyDeletedil se likkhi hain ... main janta hun he is a true genius & my best friend. bas fir bhi bechaara school mei kbhi 1st nhi aya tha...
par 12th mei toh saale ne DHAMAKA hi kr diya!!
mazaa aa gaya tha!!!
all the best..
aur achchi-2 poems likh.. keep it up!!!
wase bhi abhi toh ye shuruwaat hain.............
tutu holidays me bi kuch kaam ka kar raha hai ,difficult 2 digest.....but still nice work bro ! Go on ,we r waitin fr more from u!
ReplyDeleteu remember sumthin... ur bday n we were sitting together.. u got the physucs paper.. flunked for the frst tym.. mahn.. i still remembr ur wrds.. " bday gift mil gaya. hamesha yaad rahega ye bday" .. trst me . mujhe b!
ReplyDeletetutu.. u rock yaar.. n soch main konsi line pe dhyan de rhi hu..
"Yet don't have my very first girl friend,
yet don't have my first kiss"
hahahaha.. wait.. yaha teri poems padh k koi na koi to flat ho hi jaegi..
awsm rite up.. god bless
P.S.. tera msg padh ke espcialy rajai me se nikal k aayi hu padhne.. trst me.. it was worth it! :)
i wish mera cmmnt teri poem se bada nai hai.. hehe
myy gawd..!awsm poem dude....em falling in luv wid u tutu...lol....!!its amazing....mindblowing....!!!fantastic....u write soo well......kavi saheb....tu to bada ho gya yaar...!!gud hai...u still dnt hav ur frst galfrnd is sad....lol....bt tu ye poem sabko padha de...ek kya hazaar mil jayengi....!!simply grt...n u had beer in goa???...ahem ahem...!!!hehheh....nyc lines....n i luvd the sardarji wali lyn...hehheheh......!!raakhi ma am ko dikha aayio...she ll go mad in happiness...lol....!!urmm....waiting fr ur next poemm....!!
ReplyDeleteDude !!!!!! woah !! it was reallly kewl !! ~~~~Great Job~~~!!
ReplyDeletei jst love ur string of thoughts.....very hOnest, they are.....cOngrats...keep up the gOOd wOrk....desperately waiting for the third in the never Ending line ! all the best !!
Double thumbs up....awwee some....its was very light hearted n interesting poem... waiting for the next one!!...
ReplyDeletenice & without any pretence .at places rhyme can be avoided but quite interesting.antu
ReplyDeletevery nice TUTU :)
ReplyDeletei dint knw u also had a nick name..!!
well u hav writtn a very nice poem.. tum sab bache log to poet bante ja rahe ho... gud wrk.. keep writting !! :)
Simply ausumn n straight frm heart.tu sach me poet bante ja raha hai .keep writing!!
ReplyDeletehmmm
ReplyDeleteachchi hai
nice rhythm, write more ......... m waiting for your next :)
Snehil
A gud one..an honest one...a straight from heart poem...for the first time i feel some emotions let out..how some strange n weird first moments can make u laugh n leave u in awe..
ReplyDeletekeep on writing such poems..