Sometimes i want to cry,
but tears don't fall from my eye,
doesn't matter how much i try,
they always leave my cheeks dry,
feelings are at peak high,
frustration,depression,aggression
is all i seek by.
I use to love my fate,
now i have started to hate,
but life gives all of us a bait,
waiting for a perfect exact date.
We all live for the "ONE DAY",
For the achievement that ll come your way,
for your mate to say what u want them to say
for your parents to be proud and lay
hands on you shoulder and say,
yes this is my child,
he personifies my pride.
we wish for that day,
we wish it ll come soon
we wish it ll be a boon.
Our madness, our rush inside,
keeps us moving against the tide,
we want it,we want it madly
we can't wait,we want it so badly.
But for some it never comes,
The day which was entitled to
make us happy and jump on our bums,
the moment we could hold onto,
the time to which we are not bound to,
the thing we can lay our hands onto.
the thing we had waited for so long,
which has entered our life's song.
the thing we are obsessed with,
the people we want to live with.
But our spirit never dies
because one day we know
it will come in our lives
we just need to worry how?
And if by chance that day comes
we enjoy,jump on our bums,
enjoying life as it comes
the feeling of goosebumps.
but soon we forget that came
and again start becoming insane,
Greediness insides us take its way
After That day we all again say
Sometimes i want to cry,
but tears don't fall from my eye,
doesn't matter how much I try,
they always leave my cheeks dry,
feelings are at peak high,
frustration,depression,aggression
is all i seek by.
Well this is how I think maximum of us live our lives ,we just have craze for something till we get it our achieve it and then enjoy that moment or time for just one day and then again start to live in the hope of Another One Day. if you think this is true please do comment on this post......thank you for reading this.
NYC WORK nd tru...
ReplyDeleteabsolutely true...!!!!greedy human behaviour...!!nyc piece of work....!:)
ReplyDeletesexy poem hai...dued...keep it up..!!!!
ReplyDeleteimpeccably n absolutely true........
ReplyDeletebt can dat be called greed??v need to set our goals, n strive til v achieve dem...
n wen v bcum successful, v need 2 decide upon a new course......livin widout an aim n a direction is a useless lyf,in my opinion....wt say???
ya that's a greed in the positive sense.....but we should enjoy at every bits and piecces of our life....
ReplyDeletemachau poem..really true..we all live for those 'one days'...:)
ReplyDeletetush i bet u ll become a writer one day. .
ReplyDeleteu write it so genuine. .
u write it so real. .
keep up d good work!!!!
great piece man, genuinely.. .
ReplyDeletewhoot..nice work tuttu ..carry on
ReplyDeletewhoot....cheers tuttu ...carry on..!!
ReplyDeletearash
nyc 1 tushar ..dse r unrealised feelings we all go thru !
ReplyDeletekeep dis up man..u getting bettr wid tym..
rachit..
awesome.... :)
ReplyDeletethis is d best poem from u so far.....simply a beat out....first para is very nice...awesome work.
ReplyDelete"they always leave my cheeks dry"
ReplyDeletei could not understand this bit..
anyways i loved
We all live for the "ONE DAY",
For the achievement that ll come your way,
for your mate to say what u want them to say
for your parents to be proud and lay
hands on you shoulder and say,
yes this is my child,
he personifies my pride.
we wish for that day,
we wish it ll come soon
we wish it ll be a boon...
You won my respect here.
Exceptional... the beginning looks really defined...
However something seems to be missing...
I see two ways for moving towards life....
One taking life the easy way ..catch away but let it run!!!!
second... move ahead step forward.. make it happen...
None is absolute wrong..neither is absolutely correct...
One must know how and when to switch between gears. You can't keep it monochromatic. Every moment every second asks something different from you...
And you are here to react accordingly...
Remember, great men don't become great by doing great, but by reacting like great..
Wish you success and greatness in life..
Cheers mate
Good work!!
Heyy....
ReplyDeleteIt's Simply Great Man !
I Loved It To The Core :)
great going, kamaal hai, wah bhai wah.....
ReplyDeleteloved dis one!!!
ReplyDeleteawesome!!..nice theme...completely agree with ur philosophy....we all live in the hope for ANOTHER ONE DAY..!
ReplyDeleteI am reading it for the third time, because u sent me a mail for the third time with the same link :D
ReplyDeleteloved dis one!!!
ReplyDeletewhoot....cheers tuttu ...carry on..!!
ReplyDeletearash
machau poem..really true..we all live for those 'one days'...:)
ReplyDeleteawesome.... :)
ReplyDeleteNYC WORK nd tru...
ReplyDeleteam loving each n every poem of urs!!keep up the good work!!:):)
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