Sunday, April 11, 2010

How a Poem Is Formed....

Elite emotions,when slides,shines and are all yours;
perfect poem then glides,glows,from heart so pure.
Small,snappier,big,boasting all types of words,
when meet to describe all types,turnovers of the worlds.


It all begins with a different mood.
you ask yourself,whats happening dude?
and emotions slides from you eye
on to the cheeks,yes you cry,
sometimes happy sometimes sad,
sometimes creative sometimes mad.

The ideas for your new poem Shines,
in front of your brain,
you glide your pen to fill lines,
linking emotions in chains.

Then the POEM starts to glow
on to the sheet about which you know,
the sheet might be small
for snappier words to fall,
into the one place,the right place,
to form a big impact on the readers face.

things that are written usually to boast,
because before you write you have to toast,
the words,which you can do as a host
of your poem describing what you want,
it include turnovers with a taunt.

It is world made by words.
as someone said ,POEM is
something often felt in worlds,
but described rarely in words.




this is by far my best poem i have written and if you like it do comment in apoetic style if you can lol!!!

25 comments:

  1. nice thoughts and very well written...
    u Really rocks bro!!

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  2. haha..:)
    nice one to go..dude...keep up the gud work..:) :)

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  3. kya baat...kya baat..... kyaa baat....!!!dis is wat i call a poem.....stupendofabulouslyfantastcl!!!u deserv a grand salute .......!!!!!

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  4. trust me u r olready a poet..!!!
    i guess u can write a poem on nethng n evrythng nw. . :)
    i m a fan of yr writing. .
    try n focus on ds as yr carrier. .:)

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  5. kuchh mausam ke deewane hain,
    kuchh sama ke mohtaj hain..
    kuchh uski yaad me kalam leke baithe hain,
    jiska unke dil pe raj hai..

    likhne ka shok nahi kisi kavi ko,
    Par kaise juda kare roshni se ravi ko..
    koi baat uske dil ko chho jaati hai,
    Fir uska bus nahi chalta,kalam daudti jaati hai..

    hum kya kahe, kya sunaaye tumhein,
    apne dil ki baat kaise samjhaaye tumhein..
    hum to haal e dil bayaan karte rahe hain,
    Log jaane kyu log shaair kehte rahe hain..

    Koshish hai bus itni meri,
    ki dil ki baat bole ye kalam meri..
    kabhi waah waah sunte hain,
    kabhi gaaliyaan bhi milti hain..

    Zindagi ye sada aise hi chalti rahegi,
    kalpanaaayo se haqiqat banti rahegi..
    tujhe kalpana se zyaada samridhi milti rahe,
    Aur teri ye kalam ranj ki syaahi se bhi khwab likhti rahe..
    Wishes
    http://gvsparx.blogspot.com/

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  6. hey.....
    dis z nyc....
    i REALLY lykd it....
    ^-^

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  7. intellectual si poem hai technical man nae likhi hai

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  8. nyc... i could actually sense my feelings wen i ryt a poem :)

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  9. VERY WELL RITTEN POEM .... TRUE FELLINGS .... U ROXS......

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  10. it ws expressive and thus highlighted the predicament of a poet..... i liked the first para... also i liked the expression " Poem glows".... it givs the exact place a writer has for the words written by him!!!!....
    i actually askd u wen did u start writing?... see ur poems have the innocence and are a jolly read......as u grow as a writer we usually tend 2 lose d innocence!!!....blieve me i kno this.......i will post all my poems (post 2005 only..b4 ones are pretty kiddish) on my blog.... MAKE IT A POINT U READ THEM!!!...keep up d gud work!

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  11. Its lyk u know 2 or 3 ppl,
    poets-in-making,not 1 but all,
    u read their creations,
    the amazing wordformations,
    the mystifying connotations,
    & u r convinced easily,
    ur friends will actually,
    make you proud in future,
    & be poets that are no longer amateur..

    & then u read something,
    which is not just 'amazing',
    it is much more,
    cuz its something u adore,
    & it touches ur heart to its core,
    the words seem spellbinding,
    but most importantly, they are inspiring,
    you 'feel the words' as you read the lines,
    slowly 'surreal' becomes 'real' before ur eyes..

    u realise all of a sudden,
    u hv stumbled upon a masterpiece creation,
    but then, you also realise,
    many more masterpieces are yet to materialise :)

    (a non poetic PS: i loved this poem in d first go,& then i read it again slowly..savouring d details..cld feel evry emotion mentiond abv..it actually happens dis way wen u 'craft' something as creative as a poem..:D..ahemm cldnt help but notice a few grammatical goofups..nothing major..so no prob at ol..:)..all d best 4 ur future masterpieceS) -Vani..

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  12. well vani thanks a lot for ur comment it was amazing...honestly amazing much more better then my poem lol!!!

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  13. Vani is the terminator...
    We're dead...
    God! You're just amazing at playing with those words...

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  14. we immature she is a amateur....no comparison dude...

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  15. @tushartuteja: "we immature she is a amateur"...i soo laughed hard on this one..lol..
    bt really u r being plain humble here..needlessly:)
    its d poem which is amazing..actually worth reading..d comment is just..well a comment aftrall :D n didnt i just mention in my comment, " d words are inspiring"...so u c..i got inspired frm ur poem ;)
    keep up d gud work!!
    @ gaurav: actually u also r undermining urself here..u 2 r actually so gud in ur work..i cn only imagine reaching smwhere near..:D
    & i actually love UR wordplay :P

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  16. mast likkhi hain yaar....:D
    really,, so far its ur best poem.. ( also in terms of rhyming )..
    keep it up dude....:D:D:
    u'll rock one day...
    may god bless u... tc
    --- AKSHAY BADHWAR

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  17. the magical spell ur words have cast,
    with the thrills nd frills brimming from your heart,
    i'm really amazed by this creation of ya..
    which is the best of ur poems by far ;-)
    (that's sounds poetic)

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  18. well i have had way too many poetic comments never expexted this much thanks everyone....

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  19. hey...u were write dis is infact d best poem uptil now.
    amazing!!

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  20. ishita i was "right" abt the poem and nt "write" though i wrote it lol

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  21. simply i wanna say....
    CHAK DITA!!!

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  22. heya dude.....its awesome....you know i also write songs in similar manner.....there's not much diffrence between poems and my songs.....they all are diffrent by writing styles and layouts etc....rest all is same....i've read many of you're poems and they have been inspiration for me....especially the rhyming scheme its truly awesome......the way you choose words for rhyme is seriously inspirational...especially in this one....

    yours truly:-
    RAVI KAPOOR.........

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  23. the magical spell ur words have cast,
    with the thrills nd frills brimming from your heart,
    i'm really amazed by this creation of ya..
    which is the best of ur poems by far ;-)
    (that's sounds poetic)

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